| 雅思口语人物题高分核心 |
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| 放弃形容词的无聊堆砌,学会用一个“具体的故事”来生动地展示人物性格。一个好故事 = 细节 + 情感 + 画面感,这才是抓住考官耳朵的关键! |
大家好,我是你们在留学生网的老朋友,雅思小编!每次辅导,我都会发现一个“重灾区”——雅思口语Part 2的人物题。一提到“describe a person you admire”,很多同学的脑海里就开始单曲循环:“He is very kind. He is helpful. He is also very nice...” 结果呢?词汇重复、内容空洞,撑死讲个40秒,剩下的时间就和考官面面相觑,大眼瞪小眼,场面那叫一个尴尬。
问题出在哪?你只是在“贴标签”,而不是在“画人物”。考官想听的不是一堆形容词,而是一个能让他记住的、有血有肉的人。今天,小编就给你一个万能的“人物故事框架”,让你从此告别尬聊,轻松说满两分钟!
告别形容词,拥抱“STAR”故事框架
什么是“STAR”?其实就是Situation (情境), Task (任务), Action (行动), 和 Result (结果)。别被这个缩写吓到,把它用在口语里,就是讲一个“在某个特定情况下,TA做了什么事,带来了什么结果”的生动小故事。这个框架的魔力在于,它能自然而然地帮你填充细节,拉长时间,还能让人物形象瞬间立体起来。
第一步:快速破冰,点明身份 (Who)
用一两句话简单介绍你要描述的人是谁,以及你和TA的关系。比如:“Today I'd like to talk about my mentor, Professor Li. He was my graduation thesis supervisor and has had a profound impact on my academic journey.”
第二步:聚焦一个核心品质,并引入故事背景 (Situation)
不要说“他很善良、很聪明、还很努力”,这样太散了。请只选择一个你最想强调的品质,比如“resilience (坚韧)”或“unwavering support (坚定的支持)”。然后,直接引入一个能体现这个品质的故事背景。
例如:“What I admire most about him is his incredible patience and guidance. I vividly remember a time when I was completely stuck with my dissertation. The deadline was looming, and my research had hit a wall. I felt incredibly stressed and was on the verge of giving up.”
第三步:讲述关键行动,细节是王道 (Action)
这是故事的核心!详细描述TA具体做了什么。不要说“He helped me a lot.”,要说他是“如何”帮你的。多用动词,增加画面感。
例如:“Instead of simply telling me what to do, Professor Li scheduled a two-hour meeting with me. He didn't criticize my lack of progress. Instead, he patiently listened to all my concerns, and then, using a whiteboard, he started mapping out my ideas with me. He asked me probing questions that helped me see the connections between my data points that I had missed. He literally drew a new path for my research right in front of my eyes.”
第四步:展示结果与个人感受 (Result & Feeling)
故事的结尾,要说明TA的行动带来了什么积极的结果,以及这件事对你的影响和你的感受。这会让你的描述充满真情实感。
例如:“That meeting was a turning point. Thanks to his methodical approach, I not only broke through my writer's block but also learned a new way to structure complex arguments. I eventually finished my thesis with a high score. More importantly, that experience taught me the value of perseverance and seeking help. It’s why he is more than just a teacher to me; he's a true role model.”
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这个框架是不是非常清晰?它把一个抽象的人物,通过一个具体的故事变得鲜活起来。当然,一个好的框架只是开始。要想在考场上运用自如,你需要大量的练习和个性化的润色。这时候,留学生网就能成为你最强大的备考后盾。
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所以,下次再抽到人物题,别慌!深呼吸,想一个与TA有关的小故事,然后套用我们的框架,自信地讲给考官听吧。相信我,一个好故事远比十个高级形容词更有力量!